Composition

What Composition means to me:

copyright of Birmingham City University Students and of Muhammad RAMLAN

Brief: 1) compose a poster/layout, may it be landscape or portrait and explore the principles of design and implement it.

ie: Rule of Thirds

Visual Hierarchy

Balance

Colour Mood and Combinations

Typography

This is the chosen concept and has been editted a few times by myself. The second stage would be of my lecturer Bal Nandra and David Oz to tell m

e what they think. Pray i did alright ;)

Do tell me what u think.

the artwork was based upon Lissitzky's artworks. Constructivism.

Hilmi Ramlan

UPDATED-------

Bal said it was as though i rushed the work and fit in everything i could think of. He gave a comparison towards my text&image works which were far more superior and worked better than the one i have above here. He said it didnt work because there are just too many things to look at. 

Should i be mad? sad? depressed?

actually.. im relieved that he declined that idea. :) because i didnt like it as to how it look. even my so called made up concept is just shite. haha.

ill do a better one. i already have something in mind :)

cheers!